Black Poetry : Remote and Outtermost

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Feb 18, 2007.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remote and Outtermost

    My mind ballistic and hot like linguistic stock many spoken
    Tongues are smoking among the young, grammar is a token
    And like slot machines I pull hot and mean levers and awoken
    The fruits on a screne of facts and get absolute greenback so deft
    Life is drastic and brisk like a plastic disk its played out nothing left
    Got Ebonic wisdom into this economic system lyrical health
    Leads to material wealth finance sway to advance pay cause stealth
    Production of ROCAWEAR it on the block aware its everywhere
    And thirties the new twenties and birdies a plenty flying out there
    Wanna **** on my ride when winging by and clinging to the sky
    Shot in the air like SHYNE the affair was divine now the cops try
    To arrest me I protest the procedure no leisure in being locked up
    They won’t let me out like EMINEM I yelled out ACON! Pot luck
    Hit me hard legit spree of a retard prevail unheard of as a jailbird scrub
    My fates wild as I await trial my mind and rhymes are confined no love
    For the incarserated, scars and hated being cuffed nothing divine or above
    Average being thug is savage I love cabbage on my plate so I work
    To earn food and learn to elude quick cash on the streets hate as perk
    Local aggression has caused vocal expression rap was invented for
    Aim and purpose to explain this lame circus we call the streets and car-
    Jacking in the bar tracking down bud beers so I’m not a complete star
     
  2. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You on some ill -ish! You live up to that name, Brother.

    Truly, what you write is divine. That is floetic.

    "Average being thug is savage I love cabbage on my plate so I work
    To earn food and learn to elude quick cash on the streets hate as perk"


    Word, keep it up. It's mad inspiring.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Twist movement ....deep script
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    good flow

    you remind me of somebody though
     
  5. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR ALL THE PROPS FOR REAL Da Street So'ja GOOD LOOK AND GOOD MEMORY
     
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