Quiet Poetry Lounge : Remnants of the Past

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mndblwin, Apr 15, 2003.

  1. Mndblwin

    Mndblwin New Member MEMBER

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    I write to you words from heart felt memiors....
    waters our bond has crossed but yet abandoned.
    Late night voyages of your presence in my mind....speaking,
    Days seeming restless, often breathless from the gasps
    of realization that your heart has sailed its course.
    Though separated by the indecencies of experience...
    I feel your scent, your beauty....
    From a distant place, looking down into a crowded arena,
    I am able to recognize the silk strands of roses laced loosely
    upon your scalp.
    Indeed, I seek thee with a watchful eye, longing to capture
    one last glimpse into the open eye of your soul.
    Though separated, I am still attached, unable to free myself
    from wanting what is no more.
    Love we've shared has enchanted my core...
    relaxed insecurity to open myself without care for who knows
    my confusion of you.
    My desire for you, even in our days of anger and hatred, breathes without shortness.....
    Of all things present and real, your identity in beauty
    renders me helpless into worlds of dreams.
    Possessive I am of you, selfish I often feel in my heart....
    I don't want to share....
    Jealousy my most committed sin,
    but with true love am I wrong for feeling such?

     
  2. jamaicanbway

    jamaicanbway New Member MEMBER

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    Im feelin' you brother. Its hard to let go. I agree.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee's quiet poetic playground
    da love u feel is so real
    word up ! i felt u from da start
    never wrong when ya heart is speaking
    nice flow ............welcome
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nice flow...very nice.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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