Black Poetry : REMINISCING THEE [Warning: Erotic & profoundly sensuous]

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  1. Olorun1

    Olorun1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **REMINISCING THEE

    If I could only turn back the hands of time

    When we dared to kiss & explore love in each others arms

    Sublime & dark in a hot Summer night

    Our naked bodies intertwined as one

    Creating tender warmth, my senses charmed & intoxicated

    With the sweet scent & taste of your moaning breath

    As I slide my tongue up & down your spine and breasts

    Only to discover the sweetness entrapped

    Deep between your chocolate thighs I tasted

    Now we've arrived at the never ending grind of

    Passion driven thrusts & convulsive discharge

    Of love making juices flowing as I whisper in a sweat dripping tone

    "Ay! Mami amor - que buena estas! Ay! Ay, ahhhhhhh! $%^& me! Dame, dame mucho mas!

    You caress ever so softly my explosive hard

    As you guide me through the dark moonlit night

    Oh, what a sweet interlude of lovemaking bliss

    As just as sudden the heavy load weakens me

    There's no control from the spasms I feel from within

    ****!! Again I wetted the bed sheets w/ sweet dreams of

    Twenty years of reminiscing thee.

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    PEACE

    J.S.

    :heart: :love: :kiss: :kiss: :hot: :hot: :devil:
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin' this...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heatwave burn in ya heart !
    tyte flow of the love twist
     
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    :hot: \this it tight...
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: oh my lol :) well at least now your warning is accurate lol :)
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that warning didn't even help, cause you still set the place on fire. much love.
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek:..whoa!
     
  8. Olorun1

    Olorun1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, thank you all. Everytime I read it, I brake a heavy sweat [hahaha]. Pheeeew!

    PEACE
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow :) :D
    thanks for the warning :hot:
    el sentimiento la ola de calor.
    estimulando maravilloso
    nice flow
    Peace
     
  10. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    EYO!! this was fire...somebody hose me down.!!!

    lo'
     
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