Black Poetry : Remembering

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Mar 25, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am remebering long talks with lots of laughter.
    Light touches that just meant you are special.
    Eye contact that said so much with no words.
    How easy it is to talk to you.
    How nice it is to be around you.
    How your eyes seem to twinkle when you see me.
    How my heart skips a beat when I'm near you .
    How the time flies so fast.
    How quickly things change.
    How sad it is to lose a freind.
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice....well written...
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was touched
    I really do like your style of writing
    So consise
    So to the point!!!!!!
    Flow on sis :spin: :spin: :spin:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with twision. You do cut right to the chase, and wonderfully so.
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much . I am trying to learn from all of you.
     
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