Black Poetry : Remembering the Memories

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had forgotten you…
    But truly I didn’t…
    You were in the back of mine..
    Waiting to show up in due time.

    I can still remember your smile…
    As cute as it may be…
    I still remember you just smiling,
    Staring at me…

    I remember you constantly hitting…
    Picking on me…
    I remember asking you to just leave me be.

    I never asked you why…
    You were such a nuisance…
    I guess because I was just getting
    Use to it.

    I remember talking to you sometimes…
    And you so willingly listened…
    Quietly
    Intently
    And I enjoyed it knowingly
    Wanting you to hear

    Every single word…
    Ever single verse.
    Sometimes I ask myself why we never became…
    But I guess it’s just the same.

    I remember the first time I saw you
    When I came home from school…
    I was shocked to see you..
    But happy…yet playing it cool.

    Didn’t want you know I was interested.
    Didn’t feel the need.
    **** you had already made a new life.
    And brought in a seed.

    But I remember…
    The first time we were together..
    I wonder if we ever kissed.
    Those times seem like forever.

    I had dreams about you..
    Loving me…
    And if you had said something..
    Us would have been…
    Eventually.

    I remember us hanging…
    Joking and laughing..
    I remember us fussing..
    Or sitting in the quiet..

    No words said…
    Just head against head..
    Resting peacefully within each other.
    I remember..
    The memories.
     
  2. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Did you miss this one?...

    This is one of my favorites and I don't get any feedback? I know you guys aren't going to do me like dhis. Tell me what you think?
     
  3. honeyluv

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    hummmmm!!!

    memories bring me back to a love
    a man who watch me but i was watching him too
    i love those memories and u just gave them
    back into my head...very nice and well said.
     
  4. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!!!

    I was waiting for something?!!! :)
     
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    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm behind u 100%
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!!!

    Good Looking out!!!
     
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    Feels like one of those
    boys from next door boys...
    got me searchin through
    the archives in mind
    for mine....lol

    Thanks for the memory,

    8th!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MEMORIES OF YESTERDAYS INTO TODAYS THOUGHTS
    BRING PAIN AND YET JOY ....I LOVE DES ONE HERE
    THANX 4 SHARING WIT ME THOSE MEMORIES
     
  9. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    8th: Let me know if you find that old memory ;)

    $Rich: I don't mind sharing my memories...they always give me and inner piece...just thinking back to those days. :) See..you got reminiscing again...
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shane, every single word every single verse reminds me of something too...this here flowed like silk and took a old gyrl like me back to school


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