Black Poetry : Remembering the first time

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  1. ShayShay

    ShayShay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remember how it felt
    The feeling you had when you took that step
    Remember the passion in his kiss
    The kiss he gave you O' so gently
    The feeling of his body,
    Tempting

    I remember
    As my heart pulsates, my imagination takes over me
    As I undress him and he slowly undresses me
    Running his tongue over me from head to toe
    And then inside Uh Oh.

    I remember that feeling I had inside and out.
    Without a doubt
    I was ready
    Ready to express my feelings and show
    my love to this special someone.

    After it was over, I realized what I had done,
    I'd revealed my sacred temple to a person
    who I knew wasn't the one.
     
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    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my first

    [email protected].. i can feel you on that note. i don't regret my first time but i do wish that if coudl've been with someone else... i knew that he wasn't the one. i knew it then and i definetly know it now.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    ShayShay

    Very well put...

    I remember my first time too. :D It was beu..ti...ful. :D

    I couldn't stop...kept going back...day after day. :lol:

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    Wow! this was hot! I thought uh oh! Can't touch this (dunh nuh nuh nuh, nuh nuh, nuh nuh) But then you hit us with something very profound at the end. Baby, you body is a temple. I wish I never polluted mine...
    Peace to ya!
     
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    Good edifying work!

    The last time comes just in time.
     
  6. ShayShay

    ShayShay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx everyone

    This is the first poem I've ever written, just wanted to hear your thoughts cause I know someone must feel the same way I do

    1Luv
     
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