Quiet Poetry Lounge : remembering april 2nd

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Nov 16, 2011.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sitting here watching the day
    lose interest in the sun
    leaves fly like small brown and yellow doves
    searching for love to attach themselves to
    a warm november breeze intimately touches all the trees
    dark clouds move in harmony with thinning branches lonely sway
    my thoughts cry out for the comfort and care of your love
    as i wait for my precious moon to arrive and shine
    one dying leaf twirling towards my hand
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As i sit and watch from afar this image was so beautiful
    did you know that single one leaf is ME.....
     
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    I held out my hand
    That I might
    sAvOr
    The memory of a dying leaf
    A thief
    Stole the soul
    Of the breeze that carried it
    And gave it to me

    I
    Treasure
    The moon’s glow at midnight
    …The sun’s warmth at dawn
    When wisdom of eternities
    Rise…to greet us

    I
    Am
    Blessed

    Blessed by arms that embrace me
    …hearts that hold me
    Love that cherishes me
    Air that breathes me
    Believe me

    There is no one more needy than me

    I watch the day

    I caress the night

    I write.
     
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    Thank you, you're sweet. I can feel you near.
    (smile)
     
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    Ah, Dear Brother Poet Baller,

    You always write the perfect poem to comfort my soul. Thank you for this slice of beauty that allowed me to remember while crying a cleansing cry. You are a treasure, my friend.

    (smile)
     
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    Suitors know a fair wind blows
    At the ready near
    Pure of heart
    Rooted there
    Leaves fall
    Even here ~

    LOVE...
    Don't despair

    :)
     
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    Brother Poet 1poetsought,

    This is so pretty and heartfelt. Thank you.

    (smile)
     
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