Black Poetry : Remember When

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  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remember when......
    we used to sit up for hours and talk about nothing
    Remember when.....
    we used to hang out and fun, laugh together when no one else knew what we were laughing at :laugh:
    Remember when......
    I couldn't count on anyone else you were always here
    Remember when.....
    you held me and let me cry :crying: , scream and vent when my life was falling apart.
    Remember when......
    it was just cool for us to watch TV, listen to music and not say a word, it was just cool to be in each others company
    Remember when......
    I could extend my friendship to you, cause I didn't/ couldn't let you to hit the ground.
    Remember when........
    we stayed up late and shared all of our deep dark secrets an laughed at the silly things we used to do as kids
    Remember.........
    the evening when we moved from just friends to lovers
    Do you remember.......
    all the wonderful intimate times we spent together
    Do you remember........
    all the bitter fights :fight: we've had because we had changed by crossing the line
    Do you remember......
    how hard it was and still is to hide :donttell: my feelings from the world, from them
    Do you remember.......
    that I said I would give you the world if it was mine
    Do you remember......
    that I miss you :missu: and need you
    Do you remember.......
    that I love you :luv:
    Do you remember........
     
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    Do you remember...

    Words people play are much like songs that take us back to remembering when... I like your choice of words.

    :thinking:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and how i remember taking me back into tyme itself
    this was on point ! nice to be reading ya Intrepid......
     
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    i hope this love works out for you. i am diggin ur poem here.
     
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    Yeah, I remember what I want to forget, yet I forgot what I should've remembered, smh ...nice drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a warm vibe this had. Many can relate to this I'm sure. Love your style poet.
     
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    IlladelThug Active Member MEMBER

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    Remember when i read this the 1st time and didn't respond...this wuz hott...keep it up fam...1
     
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    It is a hard thing 2 feel a love drifting away, reminiscing of past times, both good & bad.

    Nice write.
     
  9. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you family!!!!!!
     
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