Black Poetry : Remember me ...

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    How could i not be of love
    when it's u whom i so loved
    remember dis when u started out
    u came to me in sadly shout

    Ya heart was captured
    but i set it free
    ya emotions was twisted
    but i gave it path

    Ya mind was not clear
    but i caressed u so dear
    when u couldn't smile
    i gave u happiness

    Everything u taste was bitter
    i kissed u & gave u sweetness
    when u dreamed of that myth
    i took it and made it real
    open ya heart so u can feel

    See i am love
    that's all i know to be
    so remember i am he whom set ya free
    da very soul dat loved unconditionally
    it was fate and choice that i am

    From which unto me i rize above
    to give u my sweetness this tender love
    to share upon da heavens of truth
    so one may alwayz be free respectfully

    In return i ask of thee
    simply beloveth remember me...:heart:
     
  2. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww...too **** sweet! i hope that she does!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hope so too
    how would i know once i'm gone !?
    o' well......Thanks LiLi 4 da feedback
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice thought! -7:spinstar:
     
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    much luv @ ya wild i had to remember this one myself ...............
     
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