Black Poetry : Remember Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dojo54, Nov 16, 2002.

  1. dojo54

    dojo54 Member MEMBER

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    If I should leave this life,
    grieve not for me.
    Just remember me with love,
    and pray for my soul.
    I hope you will miss me a little,
    and forgive me a lot.
    Forgive me for the times that I
    have hurt you.
    Try to remember me for the things
    that I did and wanted to be.
    And not the things that I have
    become.
    Untill you come to be with me do
    not say goodbye.
    For some day somewhere we will
    be together again.:heart:
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loved this one feeling you
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dojo, this one made me cry.
     
  4. dojo54

    dojo54 Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm Thank you I am glad yo feel this flow,

    Gaylee I sorry it made you cry. these are hard to wright.:cry:
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dojo, I cried from the beauty of the poem and the feelings it brought. I believe you are already forgiven.
     
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