Black Poetry : Relly 13

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea...heres another unnamed one...i really need to work on this title thing. :x: I hope you all enjoy... :)


    A sea of oblivion had covered me whole...
    It had placed itself within my body and taken over my soul....
    I cried out to my father and he heard my plea...
    But I saw no efforts in him trying to help me....

    I took my life by the hand as he guided me to still waters...
    I am reaching for higher things now and even better quarters...
    I don't look down upon my soul and my inner being....
    I now raise my head for everything is worth seeing.
    I treaded past hills and jumped over crocodiles....
    I swam through piranhas...and took on the desert for miles...
    I have conquered so much of what I feared...
    And I had friend who swore he'd be there.
    My light is turned on...in the day and the night...
    I love who and what I am...Proud of my new insight....

    On life that is...stone cold reality.
     
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    Sha-Sha....


    i'ont even know how to follow this one...
    i'll just say i loved it & let it go at dat!!

    this one is causin' me to reflect. thank You!

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
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    GA!!!

    Hey Gurrrl!!! I thought everyone had missed this one. And don't ask me where it came from either. I was talking to a friend of mine about my past and present and i just started righting. Crazy stuff huh? I'm glad you like it though. I guess so you'll get the whole message...its just a summary of my past and present...how i feel about me now and all that i made it through just to see that its all in the shape of one life.... My own as of course I'm sure you have your own summary of your life up til now... ;) Maybe you can share that with me one day...
     
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    Sha

    loving the strength here
    love the questions
    love the conquers
    love the inner thought

    man i loved it

    you show such strength
    keep it going the truth will find you
    but stay patient
    when you are ready the truth will be revealed to you

    DSSNY
     
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    So much love!!!

    Cindy: Yes indeed it does and i always smile everytime i look back on those hard times and wonder how in the hell i made it. I was just telling a friend about when i use to have a working car...how i would leave atlanta in a heart beat...Just to drive all the way to Virginia...just to keep my cool...inregards to my life. Driving is an essense of life Glories... Now that sounds like another poetry idea right their. who nows...you might find me right about it... :x:

    Soja: Man the love the love the love. I'm not sure what you mean by truth..i would appreciate if you would explain. I've never know to search for truth because I always thought it was shown in your everday usage...you be you and being real about you. you catch what i'm saying...but if wrong...please enlighten...I'm always open to criticism...even when i don't like it. :D And my strength...I think we all get it at some point in their life... I guess my came so quickly because my life put in place and set up in circumstances and conditions at a young age. I had no choice but to be strong to survive the anguish in my short life span. Thanks for the motivational words of wisdom though...they always mean a lot to me... from anyone whose willing to give it. :x: So I'm very greatful for yours....
     
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    i hear you my sista

    stay patient, yes you've been thru alot
    you carry the scars well, meanting you've grown from them
    you can't solve the world in a day
    you must take your time
    realize that time is the ultimate teacher
    please stay with you positions that you have now because how are very smart and strong.

    like me leave this to you
    i can only tell you different stuff
    but the truth has to be seen by the person inside themselves

    and that comes with time
    continue your sojourn my sista
    i will assist in your journey towards the truth. and when and if the time is right
    it will be shown to you

    cause it could be tomorrow, ten years, twenty years or sixty years from now or you could never grasp the truth.

    doesn't mean you are any less of a person in you don't see the truth, because not everybody spirit is on the same vibe, so cause a person doesn't see the truth i don't treat them no different, feel me but if you do speak truth than we can converse on that level and understand things from a totally different angle

    from a universal level

    DSSNY
     
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    NOW U REALLY GOT IT HERE

    I LOVE THE WHOLE THANG
    ALL DA WAY THROUGH AND SOME
    U LAID THIS OUT WITH NO REGRETS
    DO YO THANGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!:) :kiss:
     
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    All I can do is smile...

    You guys show me so much love and you can never have enough love...

    Soja: Thank you...for volunteering to be my kind and help me learn lifes my precious treasures... Your inner self... Universal huh?... A lession i am so willing to learn.... Me... i always want to talk about our society in a whole...I hat classifications because in then end all these negative actions and reactions will affect all of us as a whole not just a certain sector of this country. So i'm all eyes and ears. :D

    Rich: $$$$$Richy Rich$$$$ Thanks for the comps.... I'm glad you liked it... I was a bit surprised at the turn out myself...i was just typing up my thoughts while conversating and it gave me this...its was a beautiful outcome i must say.... :x: And yes... I've learned to live with regrets in turn to have no regrets... ;)
     
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