Quiet Poetry Lounge : Relinquish

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Apr 2, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok so here it is. The little girl inside who wants acceptance and is willing to do whatever for it.

    What do you need me to be?
    For you I am willing to be anything.
    I give you my arms
    to hold you.
    I give you myheart
    to love you.
    I give you my body to
    ... Well you know.
    I want to be
    what ever you need.
    See it doesn't take
    much to make me
    happy.
    At least
    when it comes to you.
    I hope that I am your dream come true.
    Your hopes and dreams Iwant
    to nuture.
    I want to be your future.
    So just tell me what it is
    that you need from me.
    And I'll try my best to
    make it be.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i love this piece flow on gurl
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you $$ Rich$$.
    I am glad you liked it. :wink:
     
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    my my i love it
    the flow u bring have me jumpin
     
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    Yes, that aim to please that we tend to outgrow. Keep the poems coming.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right Watz you live and learn and realize that you have to start pleasing your self.
    :thanks:
     
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    This is indeed a great reflection to youth. Get older, get stronger, and take less ish. ;) Diggin your flow, girl.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Gempis you are so right. I think that I was remebering some things.
    THanks for reading and relating. :wave: