Black Poetry : Relief

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, Apr 4, 2001.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I run outside
    In need of air
    So far yet so near
    I look at the beauties in the air
    The blue sky embrightens my day
    I endure the peace about out there
    I wish I could live up there
    Float in the clouds out there
    Where did I go?
    The stress is gone
    The wind blow threw me
    The rain pours down in the end.
    One_Love
     
  2. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    take me with you. some days there is better than here
    I FEEL YOU
    peace&1luv
     
  3. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pztvnrg

    Thanks. Take your self to that level. It is your mind. You can do anything. You just have to believe.
    One_Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt where u was going and what a relief
    very nice scribe
     
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    Being out experiencing nature can bring an ease to one's mind. I feel ya here. Calming just thinking about it.
     
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    Out there...

    Wanna one way ticket.

    Nice playback, $$.

    Nice, one_.
     
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    The want from the stress
    And the need to get there
    Inspiring Poet
     
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