Black Poetry : Release.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Apr 18, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umm what you do to me.
    I feel little quakes from the tip
    of my toes to the top of my head.
    Unable to control the quivers
    and the shakes.
    Umm how you make me scream
    and call out the name of all the
    gods and godesses.
    Planetary vibration
    wonderful undulation.
    All caused by the sweetest kisses
    on the softest places.
    How sweet the release.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let da wiggles
    da moans
    and the tongue
    kiss roam
    it feel so good
    taste so sweet
    when u release
    the flava treat
    ummmmm yummy
    to my tummy
    let it go....flow
     
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    nice flow
    likes :angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I particularly liked these lines:
    Umm how you make me scream
    and call out the name of all the
    gods and godesses.
    Planetary vibration
    wonderful undulation.
    You used brevity to your advantage here. This was a release, alright. Kudos.
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you $$R$$, Watz, and MZ BLk.
    I am glad that you all enjoyed it.
    I am trying some new things here bear with me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u bringing it to the max just perfect
    flow on ya style is sweet
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you to everybody who has had something encouraging to say. I can't express at this moment what your words mean to me. :luvv:
     
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