Black Poetry : Release Me ~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Mar 30, 2007.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RELEASING :poop:

    With all of my being

    Not one debt am I feeling

    Singing "I've Got to be Me"

    BLACK PRIDE

    Bling to your Sammy

    NO SHAME,

    To my game really

    Someone...

    Out there can feel me

    Trump card in the devil's hand

    HIT ME!

    Said the The Son of Man

    All about the God of peace

    Evil gets the quick release

    Sorry got' to let 'em go

    Love you... man,

    I'm moving on ~

    Take the show on the road

    Coast To Coast radio

    Docudrama videos

    Wall to wall stereo

    Pass the mic...

    I'm on a roll :roll:

    Catch that "N" word

    Just say NOoooooo

    Elevate your self-worth score

    Let them know you'll die for yours


    Darryl Abdu Omari :hearthis:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2007
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Releasing .........

    Poppin like it's candy
    the devil wild demanding
    can't hold me down
    i'm a child of God's town
    so i'm rollin through
    on a fast release
    cascading in da peace
    taking trackz
    like da back road
    pride is my goal
    so i pass da mic
    to da rappers delight
    as my soul take flight
    movin dis very night
    so they know
    i gotta have mines
    line by line

    Bruh this was tyte love how u did this one
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt his here.

    d.s.
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya'll thanks, to release is to be free.
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling self here

    and um yes

    I'M FEELING YOU
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    always love your poetic style, and I had to pull this one up, keep doin ur thing.:star:


    Mz.Soulll aka SoulChildwritten :cool:

    ...and the flow keeps going and going and going and going...

    RELEASE
    Hmm to say the least
    I am fresh and clean
    had too much dirt on my shoulder
    so I vacuumed my sleeves
    had too much negative vibes
    so I sprayed some febreze
    Put the sadness in check
    so that I could be free

    It's hard to escape the past
    but the chain's off my wrists
    my jail of mental slavery
    has ceased to exist
    cuz
    the safety of confinement
    doesn't satisfy me
    I had to recall my mind
    so that I could be free

    So now I'm back on this "road"
    used to symbolize "fate"
    Wait...I gotta tie my shoes first
    so I'll be kinda late
    But I'm here, no regrets
    and I do so decree
    *breathing in*
    *breathing out*
    I'm alive, and, I'm free


    Mz.Soulll (SoulChildWritten)
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good piece!
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, all, :rain:
     
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