Black Poetry : Relationships

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Just_Me, Mar 12, 2004.

  1. Just_Me

    Just_Me Member MEMBER

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    People come in and out of your life

    At some of your most testing times

    Sometimes its so hard to decide

    Who is real and who isn’t right


    In your life there will be so many people who

    Will try to hurt and simply abuse you

    In your life there will also be

    People who care for you genuinely


    How do you distinguish between the two

    How do you know in life who is right for you


    There is no map, there is no guide

    That tells you the people that should be in your life


    So I guess you simply go by lessons learned

    Just hope in the long run you don’t get burned
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwww!!
    nice flow hot !!!!!
    keep it coming
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tight! and also right on da money. welcome to the fam - lookin forward to readin more from ya and hope you enjoy your stay. :toast:
     
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    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep your face towards heaven.

    Great work.

    You pulled at my mind strings and made me think about those I allow to love me and I allow myself to love.

    My heart played bass on this one. :luvv:

    Thanks and welcome.

    Q1
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this.. because

    Very nice. I like what I :read: .

    You know I just love this piece because I'm just ME too. Well there are no road maps. Not in relations or child rearing. So turn to the examples you see. What do you see. Like and admire. Those are the fractions you take to make one. SHIP is on the end because it vcan sink. I said it and I thought of it a lot. Know what vessel your on.

    WELCOME to Destee. Visit me in chat.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tight
    and on point
    flow on

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, definitely trial and error, gotta have a little faith in it I guess. I think we all can relate to this, liked the way you brought it straight.
     
  8. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im feeling this. I like it. It is hard to find geuine people in your life.
     
  9. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if only life would reward us with the knowledge of where the sincere lie. You said simply what I have been trying to say for a while. Good flow! Good flow!
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Even the negative people belong in your life, cuz if it wasn't 4 them, U wouldn't be the U who U are...

    Do your thing, cuz I'm diggin' it.
     
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