Black Poetry : ReLaTe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by omoboladapoet, Jul 26, 2003.

  1. omoboladapoet

    omoboladapoet Member MEMBER

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    I WRITE TO RELATE to my mates
    it's programmed in me it's my fate to produce these phrases and words to serve the mind's of the weak who fear to be straight
    I WRITE TO RELATE
    i feel the tension in the air *****'s ******* different ******* becuz they just don't care
    ******* getting down gritty living life shity just for a few dollars
    how far does that take you?
    and who is your baby's father?
    I WRITE TO RELATE
    all this hate need's to be erased
    racism should have been deceased years ago
    but its still alive
    whites hating black's
    black's hating whites (its not all in our minds the mentality of our society is standing in the back line)
    the rich hating the poor
    your the real reason for this war
    I WRITE TO RELATE
    i write to change others fate
    i write because if i don't i may fall in
    my voice may drown in the sounds of society
    i feel as if everyone is eyeing me
    wondering how i just don't give a ***** if u hate or like me
    if u want to fight me
    I WRITE TO RELATE
    your weapons of mass destruction can not shake me
    every limb you raise to break me
    takes 5 seconds of your life away
    while it adds 5 seconds to mine
    by the time you reach for me
    i've already climbed
    climbed to higher levels of life
    your still at the bottom
    I WRITE TO RELATE
    SOCIETY trying to fight ME?
    MIZZ B?
    i project light, brightness and my beam out SHINES YOU
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME

    I can definetly relate to the commitment you speak of here.

    Liked it very much!

    :toast:
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It feels great to write & relate.

    :wave: Welcome to Destee's


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome wit dis deep felt flow as we embrace u
    wow! ya pen has much flava and depth
    let it be heard poetically:) :jumping: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..:)

    Welcome to Destees!!!!!!

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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heeeeyyyy :)

    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
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    WELCOME my sista :)

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    u write to relate
    and i felt the relation :)
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wwwwwhhhhhhhhhoooooooaah
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome sistah!!! and you sho nuff brought da heat wit ya!!!

    :wave: :wave: :party: :kiss: :star: :rolling: :star: :kiss: :party: :wave: :wave:

    I hope to hear more from you soon, fa sho!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    in the near future try not to cuss to much in flow
    and see our forum rules and banned word list

    ya scribe is tyte and we happy u join us here at DESTEE.COM
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