Black Poetry : Relate- sionship

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  1. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our very first date I asked u
    What are your dreams and your goals
    What are your interest
    U interested in cultural, spiritual, metaphysical
    What u say
    U don’t know, oh
    I sure do ask a lot of questions
    What’s that?
    U never really thought about it
    And we’ll talk about that later
    Excuse me my inner voice is tryin to tell me something
    Okay let’s continue
    2nd date we’re watchin the movie
    My fault, I’m watchin the movie
    Why u staring at me
    Can I have a kiss u say
    Again! Chill for a minute
    No u can’t bite the popcorn of my lips
    Yeah I know you just like affection
    Slow down!
    Yeah I know it’s not like ur tryin to sex me
    Please remove your tongue from my ear
    Yes my hand is sweaty
    If u’d stop trying to hold it
    Maybe it could breath
    Can we watch the movie please!!
    Excuse me my inner voice is tryin to tell me something
    3rd date I realized after the 2nd
    I really am not feeling u, so why am I here
    Can I have a kiss
    No! Chill out
    Oh, its like that u say
    Yeah, I’m tired of just exchanging spit
    No I don’t want a relationship
    Those questions I asked
    Was to see, how can we
    Have a relate-sion ship if we can’t relate
    I should have listened to my inner voice
    No there won’t be a 4th date
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    breaking it down date by date
    on da re-late-sion-ship swang!
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yeah, our intuition usually tells us from jump whether we need to go any further and what will ultimately satisfy us in the end. Thanks for readin! :huh:
     
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    tru dat it's what move us to knowning
    Most welcome wisdom7
     
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    You ask questions to find out more than is on the surface, and if there isn't any more, look out. Enjoyed the read.
     
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    Thanks watzinaname, you're always so positive! Thanks for the support!
     
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    this poem was so interesting...and deeeppp....sistah go head now...tell the story...lol,


    keep the flow goin
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Prizefighter, I appreciate the read!
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wisdom 7...i really enjoyed that...
    I like the title (which brought me in) too...
    no 4th date huh? - good for you
     
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    I really enjoyed reading this piece.
     
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