Black Poetry : Rejuvenating...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rashad, Apr 15, 2002.

  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tapping into the inkwell of the soul
    unfolding riches and gifts of imagery
    while listening to a Spirited wind sing
    a melody so sweet each time ink secrets
    flow onto the canvas of life set before me
    Abstracting energies
    Feeling me
    Consoling me
    Keeping me anchored within that Spirit singing
    Sending rythmic groves so smooth to soothe
    souls
    Massaging mentals as the ink speaks through me
    encrypting messages so deep it shall have
    Mountains teaching Hills
    Landfills exchanged for forrestvilles
    Dim Lights to Bright
    Illuminating the night as stars do for you
    Ole Sweet Spirit
    Speak to me
    As we sit praying for peace spreading love across
    the pages in hopes to bring life to brand new stages
    feeding hungry minds with words that are Just
    with Words that are beautiful
    as the Spirit keeps singing
    I keep listening
    I keep vibing
    I keep scribing cause the feeling is good
    The feeling is right
    Finding that peace within sight of time
    rearranging minds touching the soul
    as smooth jazz do
    Taking the mind on adventures
    I can remember
    Standing on the Panama Canal
    shores barefoot walking on sandy beaches
    hearing the crash of ancient waters flowing
    recieving knowledge from drinking as the
    waters drips from the cracks of my hands
    for I thirst to be taken over by the essence
    of my ancestors before speaking spiritualy
    as voices whisper in the wind
    Ahhhhhhh.... that spirit guides me by the light
    it moves me
    it soothes me
    it grooves me
    it’s becoming apparent to me that I can be what
    I want to be
    when I want to be
    where I want to be
    when my soul is set free

    When listening to that Spirit singing...

    And it’s quite

    Rejuvenating...
     
  2. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are wide open dude. Life as seen through your eyes is more than rejuvenating. You have conquered the evil spirits that torture the mind..divinity stands abound.
     
  3. MsBerry_98

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    Now ****...

    I'm about ready to hit you over the head. Maybe some of what you got will fall on me. You make me :puke: ! This was absolutely beautiful. You better be glad I love you....

    :heart:
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey my fellow Griot!!

    Thanks Bruhman fo checking me out!! This for tonight ya'll, I wanted to see what the fam thinks about it first...MsBerry, Gurl you so crazzzzeeee, but I love you too Sis!! I'm so glad you liked
    thanks!!:heart:
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think with all of the drama , that piece was a good balance for me today and may tonight solidify the thread. I look forward to chilling with all of ya'll for real, though. Holla.
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brothaman!! Brothaman!!

    It's all love Bruh!! Thanks for peeping at a Brutha!! Much Love & Respect!! Ya dig!!
     
  7. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u paint pictures....

    ..on the mind eyes that speak peace, hope.... and rejuvenation to this sista's world....luv the flow, Griot!


    dee
     
  8. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm along with this journey, staring into crystal blue waters feeling...peaceful

    loved this piece...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad!


    i am thorough-ly impressed lil brother of myne!

    this heah joynt... was right on time today!!
    DO YOU HEAR ME??!! i am affective-ly moved...
    thank you for touching my soul with your words.

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  10. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Fam fo tha Love!!

    Ga, Sometimes that is what I'm after...Much Love!:heart:

    DJ, It's good to be at peace my brutha!! Thanks for stopping thru!!

    MizDee, Sis Thank you always for the Love Boo!:heart: Griot fo Life!! Ya Heard Me!!