Black Poetry : reincarnation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 12, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was once
    a galaxy, and
    u were a dark hole
    ubzorbing me,

    u were the wind
    that blew into my spirit
    and filled it.

    i was that invisible force
    held u and wouldnt let go

    i was eve,
    u were adam

    u felt good,
    when u were
    the song that
    seemed to grace
    my ears with
    its orchestrated
    melodies

    i remember when
    we were one body,
    that was the best
    reincarnation of all
    see, we

    rested in calm tranquillity
    yes u transfixed me
    intriged me heavily,

    only it wasnt just me or u
    it was WE





    NOT MY BEST YAL, BUT I HOPE U LIKE HOLLA!







    yo, dis is from ya spiritually intuned poetic GODDESS, hope u enjoy the flow i drop
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was good, it doesn't any better!
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u i was worried about posting this too.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] ya did it again I am SO glad i went through the archives :)
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this alot:)
     
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