Black Poetry : Reincarnating You

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was cold that day as I sat by
    the fireplace and thought of
    you from our memories past

    Gazing into the glow of the fire's
    brightly lit song,

    I first smiled for you with an
    outer appreciation...

    as the flames blushingly spelled your
    name across the ceiling

    Wanting to touch you once again,
    I held my hands out before the
    fire's warmth and felt your presence
    surround me and capture my senses

    The smell of you permeated my
    thoughts and became the hardest
    passion to ever forget, not that I
    would ever fail to remember the
    when of us

    I looked into my soul's mirror and
    saw such a beautiful reflection of
    you that I shivered in desire for the
    comfort of your affection

    Entranced by my fascination of you,
    I became one with your sweet melody
    as my mind danced to the fire's rhythm

    Holding you in my arms never seemed
    so real, so needed to caress my heart's
    solace

    Reincarnating the tenderness of you in
    my burning memory so filled with love,
    I was moved when the fire's heated center
    burst into a thousand radiant sparks

    Shedding quiet, yet emotional tears of
    forlorn folly,

    I smiled again with a deeply felt
    inner interpretation…

    believing that at that precise moment in time,
    I felt your heart had overflowed with love
    a thousand times over as had my own…

    and once again you were within me…

    where you belonged…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    soul of a man

    can feel the unseen
    love burning within
    Nice piece poet
    Much Love:)
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad,

    Thanks for the read...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ

    dis love is untouchable
    da compassion is felt
    and much depth moves within da soul
    ya pen is stroking love notes :heart: :D
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    ...**** imma miss you!! :lol:

    really tho... you know what this did...
    the exact same thing that your words
    always do to me...

    (imtakinyouallin)

    :heart:
    BlakGurl
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gentleman

    "as the flames blushingly spelled your
    name across the ceiling"

    this is Quality........





    One
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ,

    bruh...you know this is tight right...well it is...bravo

    blak
     
  8. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The title alone had me hooked dog! Brill!

    Some memories are betta than polaroids! lol Ima bout to reincarnate a few.

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
  9. N2urSoul

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    GQ

    You went to work heah on this piece.... and I am definitely lovin' the title to this.... such a terrific choice & the substance that follows lives up to the title too!

    Well written piece G.... :kiss:


    N2
     
  10. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true gift poet....you have blessed us once again


    one.