Black Poetry : reigning*raining

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    drip, drip

    raining's reigning

    drenching me

    puddles of
    liquid despair
    falling from
    partly cloudy
    overcasted
    mental air

    we die before
    life becomes fair
    and lie
    because of the hurt
    that truth bears--

    cloudy skies
    and
    still ozone
    makes
    sean
    a depressed young man

    cloudy skies
    and
    still ozone usually render rain's reign
    like a single storm cloud
    hanging
    over this
    scrawny frame'o'myne

    drip, SPLASH!!!

    dazed
    thrown off*
    by thunderstorms
    and emotional undertows

    brought on by

    YOURS TRULY,
    drip...drip...drip
    raptured in the maze of
    infallaible
    continuing
    existence

    the beasts of earth
    run for cover
    from me and my personalized storm cloud
    trodding in
    self-actualization
    and self-limitation
    and
    basically...
    self.
    and self-laziness
    self-ishness...

    my clothes are staining
    my shoes are shrinking
    my time is wasting
    my mind is aching
    my finding's wake me
    and show me tainting
    potential draining
    'cuz
    raining's reigning.

    (rainraingoawayfar)

    sean
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  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TYTE.

    you're words are truley talking to my mentals poet.
    Enjoying the read.
    Much Love.:)
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad

    glad u felt the read coz...And welcome to Destee.

    n-joy!!

    sean
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    Sean, true talent her poet...always enjoy the reads...

    one.
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seany!


    ...into every life a little rain must fall.

    but be thank-ful... 'cause without it...
    we would never learn how to tru-ly
    appreciate the sunshine. :)

    [forevalovinwhatyoudowitwords]

    AlwaysLove.
    Elayne~
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for reading GA

    glad u took time out to reply this time. I can appreciate that.

    sean
    :nuts: