Black Poetry : rehearsed lines

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticwordstris, Mar 22, 2003.

  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REHEARSED LINES

    Your gonna whisper in my ear, lines, lies you've used before on your previous gurlfriends.
    And i will look in your eyes and, laugh in your face and tell you brother better luck next time.
    I'm not your average teenage chic i don't fall for lies or words hidden by disguise, because the last time i fell for such lines, tears rapidly fled my dark brown eyes and i cried many nights and fell apart.
    So while your whispering these lies, lines you've used before on your previous gurlfriends, remmber my heart is made of steel and my mind made of wisdom.
    So when you whisper this nonsense and garbage remember brother your getting nowhere!!!!!:nono: :argue:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well posed and out spoken vibe
    no lies can cross da path of wisdom
    and great to feed knowledge unto da
    wrongdoer of self heart
    keep flowin!
     
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    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz

    i'm glad you liked it it's nice to know that someone does!!!!!! i was alittle skeptic about this particular poem!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Alright now! Wish I had been that wise back then. Enjoyed this one.

    Serenity...
    She
     
  5. poeticwords

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    im feelin that ...especailly the third line...u need to give this teens some words of wisdom
     
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