Black Poetry : regrettably yours...

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  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...from the journal of Purple McKinsee...
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    **** hindsight...
    it is always a perfect 20/20
    sometime we wish
    it were...blind in one eye
    regrettably...
    NOT

    shoveling a diverted path
    from dreams of a
    white picket fence
    surrounding a cottage
    on rolling green hills
    with yellow daffodils...
    regrettably...
    i got
    your house on
    some foriegn land
    enclosed by chain link
    that choked away the green
    killing the daffodils
    and smoothering me...
    and my dreams
    regrettably...

    i said yes when i meant
    NO...hell NO
    regrettably...

    my soul began to wither
    as my heart shriveled...
    i was dying...
    from the inside out
    as my eyes became
    charcoal pits of death...
    regrettably...

    regrettably...
    i was more you than
    i was myself...
    filling your half empty
    shoes...(that's my fault)
    a woman carrying a "man's"
    load...
    it ain't honorable to
    sacrifice a life...
    my life...(**** ring)
    yet...
    regrettably...
    i was...
    yours

    MsDLite (c) 12.01
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gurl i feel ya

    sometyme i feel just like dis here
    u reads me so well :heart: :kiss:
     
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    "as my eyes became charcoal pits of death..."

    a sad thing to watch, through the window of the soul, as a life is snuff'd out...right before your eyez...unable to survive the pains of life, filled with stress and strife and all the wrongs that will never know right.

    charcoal pits of death, eh!

    i'm feeling ya.
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometime...

    people experience the worst
    of what is meant to be pleasant...
    and...
    regretablly...
    they live a life
    full of regrets...
    what if's...
    and why me's...

    we give ourselves to
    another knowing...
    it is the beginning...
    of the end...

    thanks for reading...McKinsee~
     
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