Quiet Poetry Lounge : Regrets

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  1. tashatoya

    tashatoya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember the days that we used to have now
    Living in the day without you makes me
    Profoundly sad, because the hardest thing
    You could ever do is watch somebody you love,
    Love someone else and it's even harder because
    You are there by yourself watching the outside
    From within absorbing every moment in regret
    Silly Me, Oh Silly Me,
    How could i ever let you slip away from me,
    Slide away, here once before just yesterday
    But gone today, What can i say?
    What can you say to me?
    Words can't fix a broken heart, Tears can't mend
    A broken heart, i want things to change and go
    Back to as they were before
    I apologize for my ignorance and misunderstanding,
    My non-affection towards you, my repremanding
    A little more time and i will no longer be standing
    Because you not being here is waying me
    Down,
    Down,
    Down,
    I'm sorry for before you are the true love that
    I have found and i'm not about to go into this huge
    Dramatic Interp. on how things are going to change
    Just trust me, believe in my word, i may have
    Messed up but you can't say that i have broken promises
    Before, well...not too many, just trust in change
    And things will re-arrange and nothing,
    I mean nothing will be the same because without you i am
    Practically insane, yet you don't understand because all
    You can feel, taste, hear and see is the pain
    You have recieved from me...me
    Silly Me, Oh Silly Me,
    Things aren't going to change, i might as well get used to
    It, Living in Regrets, all by myself
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what seem a set back is only deeper as u let it be
    i feel all ya emotions & pain hold ya head high and
    surely happiness awaits u to life u up up up !!!!
    very nice flow here...............................................
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The quickest way to get him back, is to get yourself back first. The pain will soon cease...and you'll still be there with you. Use it to spoil yourself.
     
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    I could feel the pain in this. You hurt so badly, and on the one hand you want him to know, and on the other hand, you don't want to give him that satisfaction. This was a well written piece poet.
     
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    what!!!! this was fly sis and i mean fly, but you know you shouldn't regret anything, and if you do regret something, let it be the thought, not the thought carrier...............one love.
     
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