Black Poetry : Regardless

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Apr 27, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i waited on tha block
    4 my father 2 come
    thru
    i watch the drunks dance
    with they bottle
    like a sweet summa romance
    i look across the street
    into the vacant lot
    watch kids my age
    pop
    fly balls
    with sticks and rocks
    rounding the tire bases
    remember images of
    shock
    abuses like a movie
    fists and fingers
    hittin faces
    auguments and cryin
    2 early after midnight
    why he sell your dream ma?
    for a rock?
    twisted cause it's my business
    written into my emotions
    like heiroglyphics
    so who do i look up to?
    be specific
    take sprinkles of men
    i c God again
    life ain't always feelin heavenly
    Father
    may i repent
    my life revolves around
    gettin bent
    and for the people original
    to see freedom again
    i take in faith
    the knowledge you touch
    in my hand
    blow it softly
    i see cosmoses
    galleries of oddities
    and patterns of perfection
    no misdirection
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was deeeep I'm loving it:wink:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whatever he has done, despite the mistakes, a child still looks to a father for guidance....deep piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u really mastered this to perfection
    flow head poet
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, this is a masterful flow. love the depth and the imagery.
     
  6. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Famlee

    yeah
    this quest for truth
    thru life
    is a wild ride
    on all side
    make us search
    inside
    aswers only a
    Father could provide

    one love ya'll,
    /antar
     
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    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep... I enjoyed reading
     
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    this is a wonderful poem..i feel the vibe you place
    and this is very deep
    much love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  9. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you arthur1210--peace

    peace Bluewater
    these feelings are
    burning :flame:
    inside of me...

    one love,
    /antar
     
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    keep writting son...
    your works seem to be getting better
    each time i read...word
    one love
    khasm
     
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