Black Poetry : reflections...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dnommo, May 18, 2001.

  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you in my reflection as
    I peer into the ripples Of the
    stream as the blue sky provides
    enough light to see your smile;

    I see your shadow when I search
    For mine as the heat of summer
    Rays upon my back creating a
    Silouhette formed by your heart;

    I see the trees outline your frame
    as I peer across the stream when
    I hear your voice calling my name
    In the midst of the gentle breeze;

    I feel your pulse when I seek to
    Know if my heart continues to
    Beat when the moment arrives
    To find its pace has quickened;

    I feel my heartbeat echo into my
    Soul as I close my eyes to allow
    My spirit to be renewed by the time
    I take to rest in the dark of night;

    I feel the tears roll down my cheek
    When I feel your arms around me
    Holding close like no other to the one
    Whom your heart safely calls home;
     
  2. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im poetry in motion.........NO..

    you are "Beauty in motion".........
    absolutely beautiful.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DNOMMO

    U R OF LOVE AND GREAT SMOOTHNESS
    YA LAID DEM WORDS OUT LIKE A TRUE
    KING............FLOW HEAD ON!

    AND CHEERS:toast:
     
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    GREAT SMOOTHNESS...hmmm

    i must be agreeing with his $$RICHNE$$ on dat.

    flow ya words.

    speak to the heart.
     
  5. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    8th,

    well...you already know love...

    cindy,

    thansk for the words of encourgaement...i am speechless

    $$RICH$$,

    i am inspired by the greaceful flow of your words, bro...i am taking lessons from da teacher...

    baller,

    man it's good to see you posting for my bro' i always lack words when you scribe...thanks for the read
     
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