Black Poetry : ~Reflections of you~

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reflections of you
    Looking cross time
    Within the crystal glass
    Months have pass and the love have grown
    Remembering last September…
    As you took my hand in a soulful dance
    Two stepping in the air……..
    Captivity of my heart
    You took me away to your world
    Invaded my soul as…….
    My hidden fantasy became you
    Of a mystery love story untold
    In a hush we meet on the river of love
    Walking hand and hand
    Magic bliss of inspiration
    As you kiss my lips
    And we dip into heavens springtime
    My faith was torn and bleeding
    But you took me held me
    And brought back my faith of love
    Thank you…. for the love we shared
    Undercover in a fold of a hush ……of a whisper
    Smooth rhythm nights
    Cascading passion in the air
    Up under candlelight
    We lie in purple illusions trim of white ivy
    Smooth caramel skin
    Wrap in a butterscotch tone
    Match the vision of you and I
    As the cream rum flows
    Reflections of you
    ....................Looking cross time
    ...................................My hidden
    ..........................................fantasy became
    ................................................................YOU

    (C) 2004
    Poetry by an Angel
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurl...you really should write a book. :read: I mean it...you really, really should. Your work has so much flavor in it and my soul just eats it up.
     
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    this flow is...so reflective....

    I liked it:toast:
     
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    And what a lovely reflection this is, sweetly posed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome reflection and deeply pose'd to perfection
    tyte scribe sistah
     
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    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
    Keep on bringing them Sis and
    I'll keep on reading them!

    sweet drop it tis!
     
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    Somtimes a reflection of another is what we wish or even see in ourselves we just need to see it within. Beautiful drop angel! :thanks:
     
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    Wow thank you my sister...your support and love and encouragement
    means alot and who knows i been thinking about doing a novel so this may just what i needed thanks you again for all your kind words

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sis
    i am glad you enjoyed as you did

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    thanks for the kind words

    Peace
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