Black Poetry : REFLECTIONAL MIST !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    When tears
    learn to smile
    they will
    no longer cry
    when tears
    no longer fear
    brave heart
    endear
    at this gray hour
    I envy da oak
    and rising flower
    stronger then me
    stares at da gloom
    face to face
    fearful i shall not hide
    from da stringing hail
    wit dis great casualties
    i claim defeat
    and still i knew with u
    at my side i recall ya
    love and honored pride
    with such a love
    u helpd my tide
    like candles glow echoing
    softly below we rise above
    da filled image of reflection
    da mist become still and da
    tapstry unseen visions is da
    visional reflection of our love
    we gather in our flock
    hand n' hand like crystals
    crossing cosmos & orbits
    into deep space nine
    what a REFLECTION. :flirt:
    :spinn: :spinn: :spinn: :spinn: :spinn: :spinn: :spinn:
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice.. but you knew that already!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you laid this one down...i am speechless
    this was very touching and
    i think i am :blush: with the shy :)
    mmmmhmmmm...smh

    love the vibe baby!!!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THANKZ TOYLIN HAPPY U ENJOYED THE REFLECTION !


    ANGEL MOST HUMBLE THANKZ AS WARMTH FILL DA AIR TONIGHT
    FROM A REFLECTIONAL MIST OF LOVIN HEART & SOUL !
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Reflectional

    This is very nice.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps the reflection is not only of the past, but a peek into a future bliss. The imagery you use here, wow, those celestrial images so "richly" captured. Flow on Rich.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u poetrymama this reflection is deep

    thankz watz u feel me it can river out from da front or back
    what a reflection
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    $rich
    was this a response to Reflections..or was the energy all moving at the same time...like neptune and pluto allows
     
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    as i reread this piece...my first thought is...
    its a storm in every battle and you shall
    over come no matter what the
    love shall hold it is thy bond
    this is deep very deep
    and i fully love this flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
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