Black Poetry : REFLECTION

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Through my visional mind
    i see u like my own image
    inside the walls of my heart
    i felt a tappin of love pulling
    my eyes see the reflection
    as if we was in nudity

    I've painted a picture of u
    in that chronicle golden dress
    and the shimmering sun smile
    my soul opens a pathway
    so my spirit reach u today
    only to linger so it protect u

    U have become my direction
    i carry u every second tic
    my love whispers cross winds
    in a vast of motion kissing u
    through an open reflection
    i leave this stain of compassion
    wear it proudly, until we meet again!​
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi RICH
    Mmm
    this feel so much
    like the perfect armour
    of love wrapped in your arms
    from a distance call
    on the wind breeze
    the touch of you
    always there
    Oh this is so right :)


    Peace
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside every moment
    the thought runs deeper
    and the touching feelings
    lingers, it then the spirit
    has embraced with lovin
    comfort until eyez meet
    again............................

    Thankz blue so much for feeling this and the direction it blew in.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My image my brother is sort of the same
    I got three of my wishes and the fact still remains
    When I see her beauty I just look its amazing
    Im use to model types kind of silly outrages
    Vision woman with accents and my favorite aroma
    Images of strong black queens
    In my life now its swarming
    I have shielded myself from the hate with in
    Stopping the pimping and the games it is hard you see
    My brother I have demons that fight for there position within
    You have found that image that brings it all in
    I need the image brother of Queen the see
    That my hearts in a place she can always come in
    Thats my image

    Much love Poet
    Are a great poet indeed
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i sho will. now that some country talk for ya. but on the real i just love your reflections. have you seen my reflection lately tell it i miss it. ah come rich laugh we all need it.:bellydance:
     
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    Just like the reflective image you described, this flowed like a gentle breeze drifting over the horizon. Beautiful.
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tantrum my brutha , it's only a matter
    of time before the flood gate opens and
    there to be seen will be the reflection
    thankz for the mirror image..................

    word.....Nevar i have seen your a million
    times through mines , and all the warmth
    as the play pit calls again thank u dearly.

    aweee thank u watz , through every journey
    the horizon reflects my beings in the image
    of u one to treasure..................................
     
  8. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    last saterday i was at church where they had a special evening ...

    for single people....





    first i didnt wanted to go there in the first place because ...

    i thought i hope there is not a "'we are going to hook you up to someone because you are single and need a man kind of vibe going on...""...





    for i hope that god will be the person that will hook me up to that one....



    but i am open (i have to be other wise people think i dont want to move
    forward .....aspecialy the one i think of ....or i dont want to let go)
    to meet people...that is never wrong)

    but i finaly went because i also had to bring a friend who realy needed a strong prayer ....



    when i was there they there was no hook up vibe...

    but they talked about .....




    Youre other half...

    or lets say ..






    "'reflection"'.....





    it was beautifull and interesting....
    (though i already knew this)



    somthimes from the outside people look like eachother ...
    people look like they perfectly match...
    they are echother reflextion....
    but than from the inside the 2 souls dont reflext....
    they dont match....


    somthimes from the outside people look like they dont match ..
    fit with eachother ,but inside they they do....




    somthimes both ....




    but.....


    just to know that you have a reflection....



    someone who is youre other side ,..

    half...









    just thinking about that ...

    is just beautifull.......







    and another reason to thank god for it ........



    even if you have not meet her yet...



    just to know she is there...











    this poem was a beautifull reflection of you rich..:blowkiss:











    i hope she hears,feels and reads it...












    i do......


















    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  9. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this...
    ...u got me wanting to find
    my "reflection".
     
  10. $$RICH$$

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    Thank you so much sista Auroraflower
    that is so true and real just reflect deeply
    and fine within thy mate in your soul.

    sweet baby_face
    it's within just take time and reflect
    and a beautiful image will be revealed
    thank u so much..............................
     
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