Black Poetry : REFLECTION OF A BEAUTY

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The sun rises above the hillcrest,
    As does the joy of my heart;
    Rays of warmth and love,
    From her I will never depart.
    her beautiful dew upon the glass,
    Young birds chirp in their nests;
    I watch her gently sleep,
    My love to her I silently profess.

    I enjoy the stillness and calm,
    Watching as she smiles and pose such steam
    She brings me to stillness and peace,
    Like a slow flowing pearly stream.
    My heart and soul flow with love,
    And I smile as I quietly reflect;
    I’ve been handed a sweet princess,
    one my heart n' love will protect

    As I look deeper into her shimmering eyes
    da reflecting glow of beauty cascading like
    The sun sets
    Upon the golden shores of her face
    she sit in her own glow passing
    upon me her radiant hypnotice
    beams dat mesmerize me to a stilliness

    We gently embrace mentally
    And look into each other's eyes
    I wonder is she an angel in disguise
    As my love swoon out
    her warmth holds me
    Like there's no tomorrow
    I suddenly forget the past sorrow
    inside her reflection.
    :luv::couple::luv:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    falling in love never sounded so sweet :)
     
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    Hoodie-who!

    Sounds like she made you "feel brand new" and "like a natural man!"
     
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    You know what Rich, you go stop playing and I'm gon have to come find ya.
    Everything you been writing lately is sensual, alluring,and all full of love and stuff. That was beautiful poet,
    Write on! :couple:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff Trin maybe i'll get a chance to feel it one day like i have envision it....Thankz


    cherryblossom yeah ! left a vibe so deep i can't think .....thankz


    Lataisha Nicole i'z be not playing but can you find me is the key i'z be hidden
    behind somewhere as i write da love unconditional ...now what ! ....lol....Thankz
     
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    A reflection that captures you like the dawn of a brand new day. Such a romantic write poet.
     
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    Da reflection is such a clear view like looking in da mirror thankz a million
     
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