Black Poetry : ...reflection everlasting.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by elayne., Oct 5, 2002.

  1. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet reflection everlasting

    …if God & Stevie
    couldn’t create a melody
    better than us… then
    trust me when i say…
    there is no amount of
    hate… haters… hating
    that could ever eradicate
    the quintessential trace
    of blaknificence
    that you are impressing
    upon the soul of me in
    continuous streams of
    forever-reaffirmed… daily

    there are no words…
    angri-ly uttered in hurtful tones
    or malicious-ly hidden
    in self-righteous poems
    that could ever erase
    the indescribable way
    that you have
    single handed-ly
    managed to orchestrate
    the melody & expression
    of my woman song

    everlasting reflection of me

    if loving you is wrong
    …i don’t wanna be right
    if loving you is blind…
    please don’t restore my sight
    ‘cause We know
    our days aren’t always
    sunshyny bright… &
    we knew it wouldn’t be easy
    to stand in denigration’s light
    but our vibe… OurVibe?
    we keep that **** tight! :D
    ...we fight for this Love
    with all of our might…

    & in the end… when…
    without regret…
    i’m still content to be there
    holding your hand…
    & you’re still satisfied by
    feeling your heart's beat
    amalgamate with mine
    That… is what makes
    the difference.


    © Nefertiti Days, all rights reserved
     
  2. mensahpoetic

    mensahpoetic Active Member MEMBER

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    i know the circumstances that created this piece which, in my heart, makes it more poignant...and equally beautiful. Yes, there are some people who, perhaps because they themselves lack a life, seem to be concerned about how we do...well, that's on them, though it is pitiful, because we can't stop doing Our thing...not for naysayers...not for creators of ill-natured urbanpoetics...nobody...

    so, let's keep moving...and let the heartbroken mudslingers stay where they may...in ignorance & jaded emotions...

    i love you...

    peace.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so ya in loved and all da sweet juices flowin
    tell me mo....
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is strength in your words of love..and if his strength combines with yours then together you can weather any storm...

    beautiful...but then your words always are...

    K
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um do i sense love in this piece

    this was one of your more personalized pieces GA
    i could see the love

    DSS
    and you've done it again
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok first of all i wanna say

    girl what eva he got, i'm glad he givin' it to you. you are beautiful and dammit you deserve it. second of all is "blaknificence" a word and if not then it should be. and C sherrie know i like to fight so we can get this thang crunk. nobody f's with the relatives and live to tell about it...





    :heart:
     
  7. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    mensi.... 'nuff said, mybaby. let's just be. i am
    loving you.
    sherrie. & vonn.... oh CLawd! all the fightin'
    ain't g'on be necessary :lol: but i sho do appreciate the
    support, soulsistahs! ...& the love is priceless. :D
    rich.... you're the sweetest thing! :D thank you!
    kt.... ahhh! the amalgamation of love & strength
    is sure-ly a wonderful thing. :) thank you for your words!
    i soooo appreciate you, chile!
    soja.... you sense plenty of love in this peace,
    my dear! :) thank you for noticing & for takin' the time
    to leave somethin' behind for me!

    itsallLove, chirens!
     
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    Shani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I can say is... BEAUTIFUL!

    ~Shani:)
     
  9. Sunshyne

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    My sister in the Lyght....,

    This is most definately DEEP. I can truely relate. I have (and still do sometimes) felt that way about someone....it is....well you have said it all. I always feel things from your writing. You are a women of wonderful words.

    Keep on writing and inspiring others to do the same.

    Take care
     
  10. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Yeah!

    Brick Head you know you got down wit this hea! Dont get sheri ta goin... she gone hurt somebody! lol

    And dont pay no attention to Shun... she dont believe anything with more that 3 letter is a word...lol

    It's all love
    Reas
     
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