Black Poetry : Reflecting

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  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flesh walking
    Spirit wandering
    as Soul ponders...

    Listening to the wind
    with pen scribing
    the soul of when...
    lost
    blown through zones
    unknown
    my mind can’t
    understand
    Why past avenues
    and streets that
    killed life deadly
    appear in my sleep...
    Pictures of obsolete
    images presenting
    reflective shadows of
    my soul telling stories
    of past memories and
    tragedies...
    Sadens me...as
    deep thoughts of
    lost passion for
    life so real I can
    feel the pain as
    rain drops fall
    drop
    drop
    drop
    while dead beat dad
    illusions exists cause
    the streets persist on
    sending temptations adding
    complications to my
    mentals causing my eyes
    to be blind in the subliminal
    mist of darkness
    awakening
    the third eye peering through
    the dark unto the light
    taking hold of
    all that is right
    binding the night...

    insight
    wisdom
    hope
    peace
    love

    As I stand firm on the foundation
    of this vision
    as gravity gradually
    pulls me into the light with
    pen in hand
    I now understand
    the man I am
    scribing the soul
    of when...

    Reflecting...
     
  2. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i c that u r searching yo soul a little, rashad....delve on deeper still...good things will follow!

    dee
     
  3. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** good little brother. **** good.

    :heart:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can read this piece a zillion times and still relate

    priceless work of heart
    jh.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad,

    Whoa!
    Scribeallaboutit!!
    Tyte piece.

    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a masterpiece of scribe u vibe tyght rip!!!!
     
  7. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya'll r 2 much for me!!

    I love you guys so much!! So much Love here and I Thank you for checking this piece out...I was reluntant to post this not knowing what I thought about it myself, then I thought what the hell it's all art and so on a wing and a prayer here it is...

    Rich, Glad u came thru Bruh and liked the vibe, thanks!!

    J'hiah, It certainly was a work of the heart Bruh, Glad u could relate man!!

    Coco, Thank you Sista Always for the Love!!

    MsBerry, Thanks Sis for the Comps!!

    MizDee, I shall delve deeper, and thanks for checking yo Brutha out Sis!! Much Love:heart:
     
  8. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo Ra, That was some deep contemplating. The pen takes you deeper don't it? That's what happens to me once I get started. The amazing transformation we can take when we address our thoughts when scribing, utlimately becoming a question and anwering session. I think this one was most definitely open and straight forward. Holla.
     
  9. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah fa sho Brothaman!!

    Thanks fo Peeping Bruh!!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dawg
    i love this deep sh*t man

    yo the talent shines dun


    dsSNy
     
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