Black Poetry : Reflecting on why I love you

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just getting to know you
    Has been as refreshing as morning dew

    I wanna go back
    And thank your mother for accepting no slack

    For she raised a great man child
    And I appreciate her for going that extra mile

    Cause when I look at you
    I know that it was worth all that she went through

    Just the mention of you
    Turns my blue moments into a sunny hue

    Reflections on your style
    Makes my heart swell and my soul smile

    Never would I have begin to fortell
    How much I'd enjoy this process of getting to know you so well

    I love that you took the time
    To get to know me above and beyond the lines of rhyme

    Somehow between the ticks & tocks of the clock
    You took time to know more than what makes my body rock

    Can't believe you read my story all the way through
    And then took time to wade through all the pains and hurts I had accured

    And then as i stood naked before you
    You looked beyond all my faults and loved me more than my due

    So my lover, my friend and my king
    I commit to loving you with all that is within me, absolutely everything​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....i was so into it i forgot u wasn't talking to me ....gosh he gotta be feeling good from this cause i am !!!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this is very lovely

    so passionate

    so pure

    so blessed

    simply

    this was beautiful

    a beautiful tribute to your appreciation and your show of love

    peace

    ANOTSOSIMPLEPOET
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed your reflecting.

    Lovely expression!



    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    asimple:
    This was so sweet and wonderful.:)
    Its always nice when they take the
    time to really know YOU.


    Much Luv
     
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    Agreeing with 4EverLuv, when you are loved for all that you are, that love is pure. And his love is a reflection of yours. This was quite touching, a beautiful write.
     
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