Black Poetry : Reflectin on a past/current love.... (Viewpoint from the Wife)

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh its been awhile.... hasn't it? Yeah, I know things change but things that happen will

    never be forgot... It was I that messed up this time? Okay, I will take some blame but you got

    to think.... 'haven't I been there everytime you needed me to be?' I will admit I wasn't being

    the real supportive partner in this relationship but everything that has happen this time was

    my fault? No, it wasn't... I wasn't the one out and about.... You say I bring up the past alot..

    Because I need to constantly remind YOU..... I stayed, I didn't run... because I felt we was

    going to make it... Now, being in the situation we are in... things change and you want the

    old me back.... how can you say that? Can you say that? Maybe you can a little.... If that's

    the case, I want my old lover back..... The arguments is what I grow weary of but you

    remember what we was told: if no fights then no tears... real pain brings tears and real tears

    brings love.... Real love equals real heartache/pain...... But things happen..... But to let you

    know..... I haven't forgot or will ever forget that you was the so-called best thing that happen

    to me and my life....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i felt it and hear u ya heart speaks
    let it be heard
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write..
    i hear ya
     
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    ok well fyne...

    maybe im not, enough said. nyce flow.
     
  5. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys so much for da love.......
     
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    so worthy of ya pen speaks in sparkz
    continue
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich......
     
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    your heart is indeed speaking
    Let it flow
    Peace
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you, bluewater........
     
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