Black Poetry : Redrum Memories.....

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  1. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    ....It was late
    I just laid down to sleep
    3 am in the morning
    Was hanging out all night with my peeps
    Soon as I took my socks off
    My phone started to pop off
    My better judgment told me don’t touch it
    But for some reason I couldn’t stop ya’ll
    Soon as I picked up, I heard heavy breathing
    It said, “yo, sun suit up cause we at odds ti’ll we even”
    Meaning, somebody in our crew had just got rocked
    Wasn’t sure, if he just got jumped or if sun got shot
    Either way it made no difference
    Said I was on the way before he could finish his next sentence
    Didn’t want to use my car
    So I called mi hombre Tito
    Told him the deal and said
    “It’s code red and I need to be incognito”
    If you ever met Tito
    You’d swear he was a young Carlito
    I pulled up in front of his spot dressed in black
    We switched keys
    He just copped the ’09 Acura Truck, so I took his black honda accord
    And I pulled off with ease
    Headed to the meet up spot
    Where my boys told me what happened
    “Yo Inf, after we dropped you off
    We went to get something to eat in manhattan
    You know the diner on the corner
    Of 43rd and 9th
    The one where you threw your plate at the cook
    After you warned him not to put pork in your rice”
    Right,
    “Well, we had just placed our take out orders
    We were crackin’ on Greedy @ss X cause he placed 3
    Said one was for him, the other 2 for his earth & his daughter
    We all got our food
    But as we stepped outside
    We saw Easy Mo & Sha-teef from around the way
    Had pulled up next to our ride”
    You mean those cats you had beef with
    From back in the day
    “yeah sun, back when we was wilin’
    Never smilin’, just clappin’ away”
    So what happened?“Nothing yet, they was just posted up
    Staring, you know ice grillin’ us
    Then X yelled you know it’s a lot cheaper
    To pay us no mind if you’re not feelin’ us
    They didn’t say a word
    As we got in the car watching them closely
    We pulled off still crackin’ jokes
    Remember that movie “Friday” don’t Sha-teef act like smokey
    We hopped back on the West side highway
    They were no where within sight
    L was still laughin’, then said
    Theses fake thug @ss Ni—a’s always trying to F up a good night
    A ½ mile away from 178th street
    So this next exit is ours
    About to drop X off at home
    Over by the Tracy Towers
    As X got out we said Peace
    Make sure your Earth and daughter get their food
    He said F ya’ll & call me tomorrow
    Get home safe my dudes
    We broke out
    & before we even made down the second block
    We heard a noise that sounded like a canon
    Then we heard a second shot
    BLAM BLAM…………..
    I pulled over to the side of the road
    We all stepped out of the whip
    Staring, trying to read each others minds
    Then all at once we all yelled out X - OHHH SHYYYYTTT”!!


    Brother Info © 2008

    Pt. 2 coming soon………………
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dang pham know the story ALL TOO WELL

    i can't tell you how many times i just left somewhere wit peeps and then hear something jumped off

    that's mosholu parkway right?

    on the 4 train line right?

    waiting for part 2

    yo pham stop making me work so hard meh

    typing around a banned curse words

    you're making me look bad pham

    lol
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello info-moetry

    :wave:
    Why you gonna write us to a cliff
    and leave us dangling on the edge?

    That ain't right:)

    I enjoyed the poetic tale
    and await the flow of pt 2


    MaddsistahlyLove!
    Coco:hearts1:
     
  4. jus_dat_nice

    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...waiting...
    ......for pt2...
    ........need to be paitient...
    ..........waiting...
    .............waiting...
    ................waiting...

    :insane::insane::insane:
    HURRY UP WITH PART TWO!!!!
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

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    My dear Info,
    I have to agree with the preceeding sistas.
    I need the rest. Thats not nice to get
    me into it and then just shut it down like that.
    Hurry up and bring it..... :jumping: I can only
    jump like this for so long.:)


    I will be back....
     
  6. 1poetsought

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    HELL YEAH

    Brother Info, captivating story you've written.

    Can you write? HELL YEAH!
    :deal:
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot Title

    Hey info-sweetie, that was hot! Yea...I excitedly await part two! :huh:

    You know I just recently saw that movie with Carlito.....
    real good!

    very entertaining flow! :spinstar:
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe bring on da duce of this piece
     
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    and just like dat...

    ...that's how the river flows. gotta be careful how you do what you do...coz peeps in da other crews be always watcing you. and death doesn't care how bad you claim to be...life aims to see...just how much love you have for me.

    i mean...do you love me enough to walk away from death...just because i told you to?

    awaiting II
     
  10. info-moetry

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    Peace Bk, it's all good Sun.....You don't have to defend me, I know what lurks in the shadows!

    Ty Cocobutterskyn - didn't meant to leave you hangin', I got interrupted!

    Jus dat nice - pt 2 is on the way

    4EverLuv -LOL, it's on the way sis

    1poetsought - :bowdown:

    sweet apple *pie - ty & yes it was a pretty good movie.

    Rich - ty brother

    Baller - "am i my brothers keeper, Yes i am"
     
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