Black Poetry : Redeemed part III

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nita, Feb 27, 2001.

  1. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling you tower,
    like a gentle breeze
    Felt the ground shake,
    it was your trembling knees
    You'll have me climbing mountains
    Well I got my gear
    You'll have the time of your life
    Cause I'm the ONE Right here

    Let's not leave out the whip,
    it just might be fun
    Cuff you to a bed post
    while I smack them buns
    Make you think you're a slave
    way back in the day
    I'll have your butt singing..
    Steal A way

    Your love "Shaft" I think
    is out of sight
    But My sweet lips, are Dolimite
    Shiver and quiver, make me scream
    And I do have religion called Cum get Redeemed

    I too can flow, at any given time
    And the Brothers of night
    well I got them in line
    We have just begun
    I'll have the last say
    Let me lay lips on you now,get Redeemed today!
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Nita Gurlie i'm really loving your poetry ...
    so glad to see this side of you
    thanks for sharing it

    :)

    Destee
     
  3. Watcher

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    I know what you did last night
    You were calling my name in sheer delight
    Legs sore
    But you are coming for more
    It’s like a drug
    This yearning you can’t shrug
    With every hit
    You want me to quit
    Cause it’s burning you like fire
    Carrying you higher
    The cuffs on my wrists have been pulled from the bed
    After all I get stronger when passion is being fed
    Spank my buns, well I’m gonna get in that ***
    I might be singing Steal Away, but you’ll be spouting jazz
    Shoo be doo and skibble de be bop
    Gonna keep stroking with every chime of the clock
    12:00 midnight, hear the bell toll
    while we give new meaning to rock and roll
    clock strike one hit that behind
    put you in a daze, make you feel like you’re going blind
    clock strike two, three and four
    Watcher will have you yelling for more
    Clock strike five, six and seven
    You’ll be calling on your father in heaven
    Clock strike eight, nine and ten
    Even though you can’t stand it, you want me to hit it again
    Clock strike eleven and finally twelve
    You give off an orgasmic yell
    You think its over, naw you don’t get off that easy
    I still got to make your body wet and greasy
    As I explode all over you
    Mark my territory like a dog do
    You see when I’m about my business, I never get interrupted
    You thought you were gonna redeem, baby you just got corrupted.
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Are you two finished?

    I'm loving this exchange between you two....
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maaaan...LMBAO....LOL

    Singing Jazz...lol
    Just you wait
    Got something 4 that ***
     
  6. Amun-Ra

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    Let the Games Begin!

    **** right!--Let them start--I'm in a viewing mood and from here its a good view--Amun-Ra
     
  7. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see,

    here is where the battles really began...rofl @ spitin jazz...yall see why I love the Watcher so :luvv:
     
  8. Justerika

    Justerika Active Member MEMBER

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    Lawd have mercy
    the first was hot
    but the reply was
    like red hot chili peppa
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes sister Ido see whatyou mean
    wow this is nice ....very nice...
    loving this :)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  10. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    sister Blue.
    I love Watcher's response to this...it's my favorite poem by him because it makes me laugh when he have me spitin jazz....lololol..I miss you and love you brutha..
     
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