Black Poetry : Red,White,& Blue

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by guttapoetfromny, Jul 20, 2005.

  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Red,
    the shedded blood of innocent african americans,
    beaten, and killed by.....
    The White,
    who claims to be more superior,
    taking advantage of their uniforms,
    The Blue lights flash in review mirrors,
    stopping anyone dark complected.

    The Red,
    Unjust
    The White,
    Discriminant
    The Blue,
    Abused,
    and to this flag i am suppose to salute?

    but there aint no way in hell that i would fight for you!!!! :nono:
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alot of power behind these words. Great scribe
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** WRITE (RIGHT) POET!!! LET EM KNOW LET EM KNOW
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tappin and fist high in the air...............master points of prefection expressed
    this one ring loud and stand tall as americans liberity
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You connected these thoughts together so well, such truth here poet, such truth.
     
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    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx

    i'm glad to see that you understand where i am coming from. much love to all yall!!!!
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely done piece that has the ancestrial blood that flows in me ready to take action.
     
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    i hear dat son!!!!!!!!hell no im already too broke!!!
     
  9. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your definitely redefining some colors in the flag that were never seen before. Keep on flowing loud!
     
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