Black Haiku : red shoes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Apr 24, 2005.

  1. deepy

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    shinning in the hedge
    raggedy broke heeled red shoes .....
    wet from dancing feet?
     
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    shoes can't talk so it's
    an intriguing mystery
    where did you come from?
     
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    Red shoes encased petite feet
    Sweets I love to eat
    Foot fetish... my treat!
     
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    matching dress high heels
    red dancing shoes run all down
    where did she go now !
     
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    golden dancing floor
    brilliant like some autumn leaves
    dancing red shoes snap
     
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    Kick off those shoes then
    Let bare toes, naked insteps,
    and exposed heels dance
     
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    sun and moon wither
    barefeet dancing endlessly
    red shoes tossed away
     
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    Shoes red from the heat
    our heals scortching the dancefloor
    whenever we meet
     
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    whats that tapping sound
    clicking heels on rainy street
    red shoes wet..fleeing
     
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    prancing dancing at
    the savoy in red low heels
    under fleeting rain
     
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