Black Poetry : Red Roses for you....

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  1. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I give you red roses…that grow yearly
    Long stems that stretch like the nile,
    You light my fire with each smile.
    And I fear I don’t have enough roses to represent
    What you have meant……to me.
    Red roses, for sugar plum poses,
    And Rudolphs red noses…..
    Like classical music composes
    A melody that is unique to me,
    As it is to the sea
    that flows from the east,
    My feast
    shall take me from famine,
    And I continue to examine
    my long lasting love for you.
    All I have to show is….these Red roses…
    That grow yearly.
    I tried tulips….but they only come once a year, and then
    Those tulip bulbs disappear
    And there is no time to waste,
    on a bitter taste,
    so I try to be sweet
    When it comes to you.
    Roses with thorns that may *****
    But they ***** to stick, so you won’t be slick
    And try to trick your way to her heart
    so the thorns ***** you from the start.
    For the heart doesn’t lie,
    and that’s why
    I chose these Red Roses for you.
    Red roses for you…..That grow yearly
    And I love you dearly,
    and a dozen would not describe
    The warmth I have inside
    So my feelings I confide…in you
    with these Red
    that I give to you.
    For you are me and I am you
    under the sun, and the crecent moon,
    From now till the father’s son comes
    we are here …we are one
    With these red Roses.
    I symbolize….me and you
    and our life….under the sun.
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tbone, this is simply just a lovely piece. very well written. keep on scribin'.
     
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    got a dozen

    Roses, for that special someone, seems like a dozen would do, but if its that SPECIAL PERSON, than I feel you, roses are only a start.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    RED Roses u pose

    MR. T u give inside every steam
    ya poetic heart and the love u treasure
    dear ........this flow of scribe is beauty that
    resides .........flow head on brutha T.....:toast:
     
  5. BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE

    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    two roses on pillow,
    i sleep with them,
    soft refreshing,
    two roses on pillow,
    i sleep hugging them,
    getting rough edges,
    two roses on pillow,
    i sleep beside them,
    they curling strong,
    two roses on pillow,
    i sleep opposite of them,
    they color darkens,
    two roses on pillow,
    i wrote a letter planted on top,
    they stiffen more slightly,
    two roses on pillow,
    i didn't give two sistahs,
    they blood chocolate now,
    i love my two roses fore being strong,
    while sleeping peacefully on pillow,
    satisfied.
     
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    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    off my land of acres,
    one day and night i be dreaming forever,
    to bring it into reality when it fits,
    not on my time though when i get it,
    without delaying it just organization,
    the repetition of rehearsal perfected,
    on my horse called night mare,
    she be the darkest in the land stallion high,
    with the darkest that ever did it smoothly,
    red roses to all i be the lover without arrogance,
    nor pompous endeavor just humbleness,
    finally participating in the larger picture of love,
    i got my name in it not fore the famous hanger,
    no hang man here or backward dominoes falling,
    a letter to you from every thought all my life with red roses for you,
    two which be for the day and night of your dreams and realities,
    seriously i'm working on it for you peacefully.
     
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