Black Poetry : red hot

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hisili, Oct 30, 2004.

  1. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im countin tha hrs, minutes, seconds down till I break
    just.. go off unexspected on these people these nig...
    not even gonna go there, just wanna kno y
    they wanna wipe the smile off my face
    alwayz got sumthin negative to say cuz im different
    and im not their perception of black
    they dont want to claim me
    lyk I need their approval when tha truth is
    im deeply rooted, more then they'll eva kno
    im tired of these fake nig...
    c.. constantly pushin me to my limit
    tryna figure out how do u define black
    cuz if im not wat do they think it is
    is it rap is it soul is it Rn'B?
    how bout my clothes my walk my talk?
    NO..
    how about my flow my heart my soul?
    I think I nailed that one on tha head
    I'll b proud of who I am b4 and after Im dead
    will only b judged by Jehovah or Jesus
    the rest can give love or plz leave us.
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh heck yeah! Feelin you deeply - dig this flow. :welldone:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow. I have sung this tune many more times than I would have liked to, or should have needed to. To thine own self be true, if others want to act confused about that, so be it. There's probably much in life that confuses them. You laid it out plain, and I hear you. Flow on poet.
     
  4. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow C..! so this is the finish product...this is such an amazing piece. And i also have played the card mentioned in here, but after a while the whole senerio becomes monotonous, and you just learn to be content with who you really are, because you are fearfully and wonderfully made by our creator, and therefore, theres no need for you to ever change or compromise who you are just to fit in. So this is beautiful work C..."KEEP EM COMIN"...1​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done flow here this was tyte
     
  6. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thx 4 tha luv I knew I wasnt tha only 1 goin through this day to day. Question my heritage and dont even kno me but I'm not gonna trip just gonna b me, and once again mad luv for tha support.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving the flow, heart, and soul of this beleiver.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is no definition. you keep on doing you, regardless of what others say. great flow
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feel ya...




    a lot of us do...










    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  10. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im feelin tha respect yall givin me and itz helpin no doubt