Black Poetry : RED DOORS pt.II (Awaiting Arms)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Beloveth
    cometh
    i await u
    at the temple
    i stand alone
    inside the DOORS
    at the alter of love

    I have with me
    compassion & grace
    a affectionate face
    some honor & respect
    a heart to be kept
    love & joy
    deep happiness to da core

    Through these RED DOORS
    i await u beloved
    wit sweet loyality
    take hold my arm as we walk
    down the lane to a foreverness
    and allow me the moment
    to say i so loveth u
    let me shower u in the spirit of
    our deep soul and bath u in love
    caress u in the passion of desires
    and comfort ya heart to a mend
    from the cracked promises made
    before

    At the alter of my love i stand
    before family & friendz
    and compromise my all
    in the wake of our savior
    let me take u into the horizon
    and lead u to a mental love we
    can share as we walk side by side
    O'h my belove i confess through
    these doors of hope and wit prayer
    that our stain of love linger and u
    leave the essence of ya sway upon
    my memories

    I've spool in the twister of love so
    now i stand at the alter awaiting
    the humble soul of thy Queeneth
    and i shall treasure all my days
    let's splash a lasting love from grace
    and trace our beings inside these arms
    i hold open and listen to the whisper
    as the winds echo my vioce into ya heart
    come my belove , the RED DOORS OPEN
    as i guide u and escort your emotions
    wit devoted love .

    COME SHARE MY WORLD BELOVETH :luvu:
    :hearts3: :hearts4: :hearts3: :hearts4: :hearts3: :hearts4: :hearts3:
    :hearts2: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts2:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so sweetly written. Who wouldn't desire a love such as this, brimming with devotion. Your beloved sounds very lucky Rich. :)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    walking through the doors guide me and escort my emotions
    wit devoted love. I am loving this vibe baby :kiss:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff watz thankz for that sis....

    well now Angel come this way--------->
    can u cuddle into the tender lame and be
    covered in the captivity of love that's deep
    and warm as it caress u once you step
    beyond the RED DOORS to luv ?
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Again you take me there

    Again and again you seem to spoil the world
    with the love that you place into your craft
    you are an inspiration to the soul and the effect
    you have is electric
    the best is still yet to come from you
    :hearts3: :hearts4: :kiss2: :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    aweee thank u my humble heart beats faster
    your words give me higher hope i'll try to bring
    it even deeper / sweeter and lovable thankz
    soulful2006 a million tyme in shine .................
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Red Doors

    Rich, this is a very beautiful write of how love can shine from
    the heart.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when the heart can feel it
    it shines so bright there's no night in it
    thank you very much sista Queen
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da Doors are open as wide as my arms
    my warmth of love is ready to charm
    set to escort u down the lane
    just whisper , holla , scream my name

    RED DOORS await u sweet Lady !


    :spin: :hearts2: :flowers: :hearts1: :flowers: :hearts2: :spin:​
     
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    this was nice rich keep them flo's coming my brotha.:spinstar:
     
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