Black Poetry : RED DOORS 2 LUV

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Beyond the sparkle
    the glittering glaze
    awaits ya hearts
    journey within da
    entering doors
    follow the spirit
    as it walks u through
    the cascade to warmth

    belated or at sunrise
    the red doors are open
    to muffle ya soul in the
    essence of togetherness
    in a rapture befounded
    in the bedded garden
    come into my world !!!

    let me walk u down the
    lane of love and shower
    ya heart in this compassionate
    enter lace and bath u in
    da foreverness of soulful mixture
    cometh beloveth and share my
    world through a fantasy of
    deep desires and a blaze of fire
    of hot sensuous us

    Barefoot in the sunflower of my
    lasting heart as i cover u in joy
    through these doors is true love
    awaiting like music in the night
    i am !
    musical of night
    gently depicting the cascading notes
    permeate my beings , now intonations
    of varied chords on a delightful flyght
    of studied cadence come my beloveth
    through these big
    RED ~ DOORS to LUV
    :flowers: :love: :spin: :love: :flowers:

    A Dyamondluv splash
    Nu~wave 2005 Creation
    AlRights Reserved $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Through those red doors 2 luv, sounds like quite a beautiful place to be, a paradise for you and your beloved. Flow on brotha.
     
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    Nice lovers paradise created by the writer in this piece.
    Very well laid out as you brought us into the lovers paradise..
    thanx for sharing...
     
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    now these doors i wouldnt mind walking through nice and smooth

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    yo ,can i borrow those red doors dawg??!!!!tight peice RICH...whatta playa.....!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz it's a place of true love and heart

    thankz Angel just walk this way -----------> to happiness

    thankz Godssoulja happy you enjoyed the journey inside

    thankz LURK man you can share the RED DOORS any day
    any time to make love shine in the divine form
     
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    re: Red Doors

    Rich, this is a very beautiful poem.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    come on in poetrymama and thank u so much
    this way ----------------------------->> they open !
     
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    I think I'm in love

    In love of course with your writing
    the way you have your way with words
    I can't express it properly other than to say
    You make me want to write
    and so I will
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    step inside scribe & vibe
    the doors are open cometh
    within and thank u so much
    happy it brings the pen out ..soulfully
     
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