Black Poetry : Recoverage

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Flor_Rosada, Jan 7, 2004.

  1. Flor_Rosada

    Flor_Rosada Member MEMBER

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    Broken promises keeps the emmotions of a broken heart,

    The unworthy conquest tearing two lovers apart.

    Lost and delirious, the lovers ponder to themselves,

    Building much more sorrows on their thinking shelves.
    Wondering what indeed made their happiness derail.

    Their effect is as well effected by who they are surrounded by,

    The spirit and confidence on the deathbed's lie.

    The only way to bring them together once again,

    Is to allow room and space for their hearts to mend.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi:wave: Welcome to the family
    of love and embrace
    feeling you on this flow
    that inner healing
    feeling..much love to you
    Please do share more
    of your flows..
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  3. Khasm13

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    nice scribe...
    please share more...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & bond
    this was awesome scribing look to read more of u
    :toast: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. Flor_Rosada

    Flor_Rosada Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for all the love.
     
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    wow , i love every line.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

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    :wave:
    welcome to destee....
    hope to read more...
    welcome again....
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes people need their own space to recover, and should be allowed that...thought provoking piece.
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a sweet release...
    let the ink flow...
     
  10. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u write with such wisdom and a uniqueness lies between each word written 17 huh... continue to speak poet and find your voice and more importantly love your voice ... there are many of us