Black Poetry : Reclaimed / The Demise of Paternal Absence

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Sep 24, 2003.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *sigh* this is beautiful (as usual):)
    much love,
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa!
    this was stimulating
    deep in my soul u did it again!
    this was beautiful & tyteeeeeeeee!
     
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    Oh my goodness, wow, wow, wow. This is a picture that emerged from deep waters to be beautifully painted. You are a true artist, angelicsage. I am thankful I can read your work.
     
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    oh this was deep...
    love the way you paste the
    picture to be seen and heard...
    and its all of truth...
    thank you for sharin...
    i really like this read...
    nicely pose...
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like i should be surprised or something, this was tyte girl. How many women do we know and are we that have a hard time acknowledging something to begin with and then when we lose it no one understands how we can cry over what never was. Loved it.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Story & Rich........this is actually a true story of someone I'm close to,
    it is a reflection of her struggle to come to terms with the distant
    relationship she had with her father, and how she somehow
    found solace in a mans arm....but later in life stopped the destructive behavior....


    XXXPanthaXXX, uh huh, I'm a student of yours....humbly in thanks for the luv you've shown to my work! thanks again...

    Gempis........I really am an artist, I never thought it came across in my
    writing though, I'm just dabbling...but u sure know how to make a
    sister feel good! Thanks

    Mzblkangel.......as I said before the depth is link to the realness of this story
    it's a struggle I saw a lot when I was coming up, wasn't sure
    I could truly depict it...........but Thanks, your words let me know I did

    Randee........just having your here, knowing how deep your vibe is
    when you step to the page....but I love the perspective you brought
    you completely nailed the truth of this piece on the head,
    Thanks for the "vision", if anyone would feel this, I know you would.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "I did see her,
    a woman reclaimed, she was
    ………from a silent killer
    who’s absence was greater
    than that of it’s presence"

    :bowdown:
    when I read you I smile because i know...there is hope :)
     
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    whoa this is deep
    let me read it again...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    I couldn't expect any less!

    EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!
    I loved this melancholy tribute to our missing father's for whatever reason.
    Loving you for your wisdom you bless my heart every time I read you, you read so many of our past lives and give us the courage to forge new ones!
    Blessings On your House!
     
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