Quiet Poetry Lounge : Recipe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mrron, Jan 2, 2007.

  1. mrron

    mrron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is my love poem to my wife Slendah to start the New Year off right. Hope you enjoy it.

    Recipe

    You are my main ingredient
    And all I'll ever need
    How about you, my darling?
    Am I included in your recipe?

    I have looked on the love menu
    There's love on every line
    Hope has love, passion has love
    There's love of every kind

    When you walk into a room
    I know what to feel without a clue
    I just want to know from you, my dear
    Am I the meat in your barbeque?

    Sometime's I'm a little snooty
    Other times a little shy
    I've only one question to ask of you
    Am I still the wind that blows your chimes?

    When the sun goes down in the evening
    And you're ready to finish your day
    Just call my name in a sexy tone
    And I'll make you night an escapade

    When we've come to the end of our journey
    And the road we find goes west and east
    Will you take the road that leads to heaven with me?
    That would complete our recipe.
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mrron:
    This is absolutely beautiful.
    I am sure your wife luved it.

    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesomely beautiful surely she will love this
     
  4. robboy2003

    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You'll get cavities from this one here,and warmth from the chill. It was very very good! Keep it up no pun intended bro.:great: :terrific: :thanks:
     
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    Wow... lovely. What a great way to begin the new year :spinstar:

    :tennis:

    :picture:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So genuinely heartfelt, certainly your wife loved every word.
     
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