Black Poetry : Recidivism

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dysfunctional behavior
    looking for favor from
    THE MAN
    ...ANY MAN...IN

    ANYWAY THAT SHE CAN,
    with...
    her own or someone else's man
    sex two, four, six times per
    week or day
    BY...ANY MEANS NECCESSARY SHE...
    brings them to peak...
    they...get weak
    in the knees
    Loving the way she teased and pleased

    RECIDIVISM...

    on again...off again
    repetitive behavior
    hoping to get love
    in return
    Only to find she'd
    been burned

    RECIDIVISM...

    the cycle continues...

    didn't love herself enough
    to know...she didn't have to "BLOW"
    T' SHOW...SHE
    had T' GOIN' ON

    didn't love herself enough to know
    if she was naive and open they'd
    *** her and go

    RECIDIVISM...

    feeding on negative criticism
    she...
    EATS...SLEEPS... DRINKS
    Eats...Drinks...Sleeps
    sleeps...eats...drinks and...drinks again
    DroWning in self pity
    self-destructing
    ....man wanting
    sex-loving
    .....man hunting
    self-neglecting
    ......dis-respecting SHE...she's
    CONFUSED, don't know why
    DESPERATE, can't comprehend how
    SEEKING RELATIONS NOW

    bruised and abused
    soul temple
    cracked dome soul
    dies slow
    spontaneous combustion through
    multiple vaginal penetrations
    Reaching peak of
    TOTAL SELF-DESTRUCTION

    RECIDIVISM...

    Will this saga continue into 2001?

    RECIDIVISM...TO RELAPSE; FALL BACK INTO A PATTERN OF BEHAVIOR

    (c) 2001EssenceofAminata all rights reserved
     
  2. poeticdelight

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    i hear you...

    but when will he

    hmm

    pd
     
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    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AFRI

    this sounds like a true story

    this work is like a mini-series of sorts

    in other words this in one hell of a piece of work

    liking yo' style
     
  4. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fam

    I was inspired by an aquaintance to write this piece.

    :heart:
     
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