Black Haiku : REBOUND

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Dec 9, 2007.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    you destroyed it why
    you could have ruled my kingdom
    you destroyed it why

    each day i woke yours
    skipped heart beats to unite us
    each day i woke yours

    each day you woke yours
    skipped signs that i might leave you
    each day you woke yours

    I lost me in you
    what is love i do not know
    I lost me in you

    who is who in love
    individuality
    who is who in love


    (practicing haiku ya'll please advise)
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    the stench of your sweat
    turns me on immensely dear
    i wish you were here

    smelling his cologne
    turns me off i think of you
    i can not move on
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    suspended in time
    don't want him although God blessed
    I love you can't rest
     
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    Frozen, can't move on
    Tried to proceed, but love's chillz
    Got a hold on me

    (No need to advise, you've got it, flow on...)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Under da maze of
    her slumbering warmth of love
    i'm traped into her

    U doing it so well keep flowing wit that flair...
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    femininity
    the new makes me feel woman
    one day i'll love him

    your face fades away
    each time his heart beats with mine
    time does heal all wounds

    patiently he waits
    to show me rainbows not clouds
    he has wiped my tears
     
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    walking on solid ground
    learning how to step and stride
    The tears flush my soul
     
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