Black Poetry : REBORN

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  1. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reborn


    Conceived in an Indigo reign

    beneath the broken branches

    of the great yohimbe

    Libations of nocturnal sunshine feed

    the fertile grounds from whence I came

    Life's breathe

    injected into my soul

    Like poetry melodically cultivating

    resonating and illuminating

    my mind's eye

    as I depart the womb of innocence

    Slowly I gestate in the colors of the dawn

    REBORN into a holy realm of passion

    In this deeper shade of blue

    suckled at your breasts

    With milk -n- honey

    I am nourished


    Poem by: James A. Davis, Jr.
    August 10, 2001
    Revised: April 8, 2002
     
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    unique...i like it...
     
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    whoa.....
    this was some imagery
    creativity
    and a true mentally provoking
    poetic journey...

    I truly enjoyed this....Encore:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very well crafted
    love the flow
     
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    like the flow...
    done very well
     
  6. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fam... The love is always appreciated. It's been a minute since I posted any work. Feels good to be home.
     
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    glad to have you home :)
     
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    wonderful energy flow
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    the imagery in this piece was just off the hook...very beautiful. much love
     
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    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JUST TRYING TO KEEP THE FLOW UNINTERRUPTED ;-)
     
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