Black Poetry : ReBORN (From the ashes of Blakverb)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SlaveSong, May 14, 2002.

  1. SlaveSong

    SlaveSong New Member MEMBER

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    Once more a blakman dies
    and I buried him within
    the pages that were written

    I placed he and words in
    a vessel of change and lit
    the flame ...

    and watched him rise

    slowly he rose
    dancing / but in another form
    to a breath of a day
    the blew metamophosis
    into the eye of the storm

    the spirit held hands with
    the fallen tears from clouds
    and was accepted by the soils
    as a new man was born

    from the womb of the slave's verse
    breastfed on the hope that was
    indelibly written in time

    a SlaveSong was created...

    SlaveSong (c)2002
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL

    Breathtakingly beautiful and wonderfully scribed.
    Like the Phoenix we rise and survive!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no doubt this is tyte..
    glad to see the rebirth.


    nfinite
    jh.
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No doubt SlaveSong...

    As I look upon the "rebirth" with watchful eyes...

    the message remains the same...

    Happy "reborn" day my "Blak" brotha!!!

    :peace:/
    GQ
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes

    you have to burry the old to find the new.





    One
     
  6. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    BRAVO!

    MAGNIFICENT!

    You said it so well! :toast: SING YOUR SONG, BROTHER! :bowdown:







    And :birthday:
     
  7. Gouraige

    Gouraige New Member MEMBER

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    Happy Born Day!

    You were missed my brother!
     
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